tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post7565056133015527039..comments2024-01-03T02:24:32.515-08:00Comments on Where Ladybugs Roar ~ Wendy's Writing Blog: Those Extra SyllablesWendy Sparrowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06240583852940769313noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-63123889064154351232011-06-17T13:41:50.103-07:002011-06-17T13:41:50.103-07:00This was really interesting to think about how see...This was really interesting to think about how seemingly small changes to the way a character thinks or talks impacts the mood and deepens the reader's connection. We often don't think about how important such things are in creating the characters and plot we envision in our heads. Glad to know you hit upon a great perspective!Julie Gloverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14750682989494250914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-35592715981786309742011-06-08T20:37:35.805-07:002011-06-08T20:37:35.805-07:00Lindsey-- Oh, thank you! I finished revision on t...Lindsey-- Oh, thank you! I finished revision on the first chapter and I'm really happy with the voice in it now... and then I started the second chapter with Hallie's voice and stumbled. I'm going to try again after the kids are in bed. The voices are getting drowned out by my kids currently. Le sigh. Thanks for commenting. *hugs* I've been having a rough day, so it meant a lot.Wendy Sparrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06240583852940769313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-50947403781527197562011-06-08T18:58:15.954-07:002011-06-08T18:58:15.954-07:00It can be so hard switching from one character'...It can be so hard switching from one character's POV to another's. So impressive that you thought of the syllables and word choice--I would imagine that it will make the characters distinct from each other. And I know you said the new version is rough, but I like it! It's got a lot of umph to it now :)Lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00645447010676868950noreply@blogger.com