tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post9109627581720523386..comments2024-01-03T02:24:32.515-08:00Comments on Where Ladybugs Roar ~ Wendy's Writing Blog: Day Twenty-four-- The plot thickens, congeals, and becomes lumpyWendy Sparrowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06240583852940769313noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-16023370837468750132009-11-25T07:40:19.028-08:002009-11-25T07:40:19.028-08:00Very creative blog & artwork! New blog on the ...Very creative blog & artwork! New blog on the Hx. of the Ladybug:<br />http://historyoftheladybug.blogspot.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-7566155159916627082009-11-24T20:13:03.770-08:002009-11-24T20:13:03.770-08:00I'm with L.T. and you on this one, Wendy. I f...I'm with L.T. and you on this one, Wendy. I felt a little on the gross side thinking Jacob was hot and I really did get annoyed with him in the books.<br /><br />And the 4th book was awful!<br /><br />That said, I say just finish your book and then wrap up the plots. I kind of felt the same way with HATSHEPSUT, but then when I rewrote my ending everything came together perfectly. Just keep plugging away!<br /><br />And I think you and L.T. gave me your migraines. I haven't had one in ages but I had one yesterday. It was baaaaaad!Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-1917411060323441732009-11-24T17:38:03.812-08:002009-11-24T17:38:03.812-08:00Sometimes -- and I think this is related to your p...Sometimes -- and I think this is related to your post -- I feel like I'm writing too much action and not enough narrative. Then, I'll try to write something that doesn't include action and it sounds sooo contrived. <br /><br />Hrmph. I'm frustrated with THAT. <br /><br />And I can't wait for turrrkey gravy.Leigh Hutchens Burchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13974935740527936303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-69682953431215476472009-11-24T13:17:16.951-08:002009-11-24T13:17:16.951-08:00Okay, something is wrong with me. Even though I to...Okay, something is wrong with me. Even though I too had to take a shower fore shame of ogling a minor, I find Edward, well luscious. I know, I know, I know. What is wrong with me? He’s pasty, thin, white, and frail but he calls to me.<br />"Grrr, yeah baby." (sorry Austin moment)Dana Elmendorfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07130309062939542854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-85474510389333447322009-11-24T12:33:25.241-08:002009-11-24T12:33:25.241-08:00I hate to revert to teen girl here, but OMG yes!
...I hate to revert to teen girl here, but OMG yes! <br /><br />I felt bad, because when I read the books I was all about Edward and Jacob just annoyed me. In the movie though, it was exactly the opposite.L. T. Hosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12448176940211118898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-49270070364093420292009-11-24T12:19:34.026-08:002009-11-24T12:19:34.026-08:00I have the exact problem--too much gravy. I mean p...I have the exact problem--too much gravy. I mean plot.<br />When I started SRH, I wasn't sure what direction it was going in, so I developed all these different side-plots because I was unsure of which ones were going to be the main ones and now there is way too much going on. The plan is to CUT, CUT, CUT when it gets time to edit.<br /><br />Enjoy your gravy...I mean story. Enjoy your story.Jadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02444920778218867295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-90204897757178871232009-11-24T11:31:31.058-08:002009-11-24T11:31:31.058-08:00YES! Too much plot. I have bunches to tie up; I&...YES! Too much plot. I have bunches to tie up; I'm dizzy. <br /><br />What do they say about keeping to your theme? Maybe that's my problem...I can't remember.Catherine Dentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13771249741266703689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-82297017312627245052009-11-24T11:17:27.349-08:002009-11-24T11:17:27.349-08:00Ah, Wendy. You always make me smile. I love gravy,...Ah, Wendy. You always make me smile. I love gravy, too. Maybe you and I should get together, eat something with gravy, and you can give me some of your plot, since mine feels plotless. Ugh!Tina Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05914428134837892539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-16295934130625054302009-11-24T10:10:00.289-08:002009-11-24T10:10:00.289-08:00My intent is always for the cheap thrill and the e...My intent is always for the cheap thrill and the easy laugh, Tere. :) <br /><br />L.T.-- Did you get the opposite reaction when pale and pasty-white Edward stepped out without his shirt on? Blech. Okay. That was icky after so long staring at tan and buff Jacob.Wendy Sparrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06240583852940769313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-85342362259395729392009-11-24T09:59:28.009-08:002009-11-24T09:59:28.009-08:00LOL, thanks for the laugh-- I hope that was your i...LOL, thanks for the laugh-- I hope that was your intent-- and ya know, my last few novels suffered from excess gravy, I mean plot. In fantasy, I think that's more acceptable than some other genres. <br /><br />Good luck finishing Scorched!Tere Kirklandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13562750950130316280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7589253886068784629.post-2661500928386397302009-11-24T09:49:20.761-08:002009-11-24T09:49:20.761-08:00I say, do whatcha gotta do!
Also-- totally get th...I say, do whatcha gotta do!<br /><br />Also-- totally get the whole Jacob thing. I felt the same way. *blushes*L. T. Hosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12448176940211118898noreply@blogger.com