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Sunday, March 14, 2010

PG Love Fest

Okay... I'm totally in love with blog fests... and I don't know why, but I am. This one: The PG Love Scene Love Fest intrigued me.

(Scene swiped back)



23 comments:

  1. This is absolutely, beautifully PG. The build up of Sheri's loss of memory; the undying declaration of love from Thomas; her acceptance of everything she vaguely remembered. Very romantic.

    Not MG.

    But beautiful. Star crossed lovers style. Intriguing enough to entice me into reading the full romance novel.

    Thanks for sharing.

    ..........dhole

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  2. *licks fingers* Now that was delicious. How do you come up with this stuff?

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  3. Lovely and romantic. I adore the the fairy tale feel. Plus, I venture most writers can relate to Sherri. We, too, like to make up stories. :)

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  4. Lovely! A story I want to read. :-)

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  5. Beautiful. So touching and romantic, and the prose is elegant. First true PG love scene I've read so far!

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  6. I don't know, Donna. I wrote it for the same audience as Ella Enchanted. Isn't that a MG book or does it cross to YA? It doesn't feel like YA... it feels slightly younger, but I could be wrong.

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  7. Very sweet and romantic. Love the fairy tale angle :)

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  8. Wow. Does this have a little bit of the Scheherezade story in it, as inspiration, perahps? I love the idea. Very cool.

    Nicely done, good lady! :)

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  9. Very cool Wendy. You definitely have a creative mind to come up with all of that. I'm very impressed!

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  10. Wendy - love the story telling (lies) and that Sherri's stories become truth. Very tender and definitely has the stamp of your humor. I truly enjoyed the read. Fairy Tale all the way. :)

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  11. I love this story. Sweet, romantic, with adventure too. It's awesome.

    As for MG, this scene by itself may not seem MG but taken together with the whole novel, it is MG. Sheri's voice, when not syrupy with about-to-be-kissed elixer, is young... but not young adult. IMO.

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  12. Lovely, m'dear! The horse's comments are a wonderful addition to the romance and the pacing is perfect!

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  13. Simon, it's a retelling of that story, but I've been close-mouthed about it because there aren't other retellings out there in this retelling-saturated market. I was hesitant to even post this because of that, but I think I'm just being weird about it.

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  14. This was so lovely and whimsical and adorable I loved it and please can I read the book? Great job!

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  15. Okay... so now that I've realized the length of this manuscript isn't a problem as a mid-grade, I'm all excited about it again. Di suggested I get some MG beta readers to help me polish it before I even think of querying on it. So, if any of you were serious about wanting to take a gander at the full thing... contact me at wendy at sparrow dot us I need a beta read for suitability as a MG and overall flow.

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  16. This is beautiful. Very lovely and sweet and whimsical. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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  17. I couldn't agree more with all of the adoring commenters. This is such an interesting story -- I'm not familiar with the one you are retelling, so, for me, it's like walking into a new world.

    And you've written it so beautifully. Well done, my friend!

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  18. Okay, I seriously loved the horse jabbering and the castle allowing her to live because of the stained glass window stories, and the king changing things and her pretending to believe him. Well done. Cute.

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  19. Oh this is so sweet and romantic! *Sigh* I'm really intrigued, that was so interesting!

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  20. See, posts like this--they're why I just gave you a blogging award! Click over to my site to pick it up.

    So glad I found you, Wendy!

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  21. Wonderful! Fanciful and Fantastic! I would definitely read more!

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