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Confessions and Passions of a Compulsive Writer

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Oh for crying out loud, Captain Obvious

As I'm rereading this, I've used a passive voice way too frequently, and I'm stating things that are obvious. Yeah... this needed a rewrite. After I'm done with this rewrite, I might reprint it before I start approaching agents again. It's so much easier to spot typos in a printed copy and Lulu's rate of around $7 beats what I could have it printed for.

Back to self-disgust and adverb slaughter.

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